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Cian Hywel

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: That Day

    She takes a sip from her coffee, her sight cloudy from fatigue. It had been a year today, since the accident. Or was it today? What did it matter, what ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Words from my heart

    I like it. It's very simple, and yet elegant. But most of all, it's VULNERABLE. The poem feels intimate and "real," and I feel as if I've been given a ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Fair Goes By

    You pulled me in from the moment I read the title. And the poem more than lives up to the expectations I had when I saw the title. The words ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: When I Was Young

    Yes, this poem is very disturbing, but mostly because it's real, whether it's how children can be cruel or how this cruelty grows up along with children. I was moved ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love is my season

    A year with you, a sigh from the ocean I don't know Sapphire, it sounds to me a lot like a wave crashing in, and pulling out. I think you ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love is my season

    I’ve never seen the summer plant, as much hope as you can sow. I think the comma here is a hindrance to the meaning. Without the comma, plant is more ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love is my season

    All I can say is ...wow. Beautiful, exquisitely beautiful.

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: What Is Your Favorite Least Favorite Color!?

    Ochre. It looks like faded and decayed vomit. Disgusting.

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Shadow

    If you ask me what is wrong I won't know what to say If you ask what I want, I will still meet you with silence. Not completely present, Not ...

    Jul 12, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: White Raven, beginning portion

    Hey, I really like the idea. This is a really good pioneering of the world of your story. I want to hear more about the raven without the power (what ...

    Jul 12, 2008


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites